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February 3, 2020
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All new, made within the past month

https://soundcloud.com/slxxpyhollow/arbiter

https://soundcloud.com/slxxpyhollow/forgottenrotten

https://soundcloud.com/slxxpyhollow/5minutebeatchallenge

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a favorite:

I have an re-worked version that is much better:

 

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February 3, 2020
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Would love any and all constructive criticism

February 4, 2020
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February 4, 2020
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is it songs? beats? spoken word?

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February 4, 2020
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Pretty dope, I'd say.

Keep making beats.

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February 4, 2020
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I only listed to a few. They're fairly generic horrorcore beats. Horrorcore is a dead genre so you may want to explore new avenues.

The ones I listened to were very slow and not very dynamic which isn't bad but it's hard to get excited about them. 

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February 4, 2020
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I like the vibe of "Spell on you" but the bass is weak.. and it needs an extra instrument on the verses to really set them off..

 

"forgotten rotten" is a pretty good raw underground beat but I personally cant stand that chirping noise throughout it..

 

"i hate myself" this is some fire ass wicked shit.. the bell that starts at 1:20 could be turned down a lil.. & you might need to cut it sooner to keep it from gettin stale...  I'd love to rap to it or let an artist Im workin with use it tho.. 

 

"beherit" damn this is fire too.. it would depend on what the voice is saying but I could def use this for a "sedatives" like track..

 

you tryin to get some rappers on your stuff??

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February 4, 2020
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The Warlock said
I like the vibe of "Spell on you" but the bass is weak.. and it needs an extra instrument on the verses to really set them off..

 

"forgotten rotten" is a pretty good raw underground beat but I personally cant stand that chirping noise throughout it..

 

"i hate myself" this is some fire ass wicked shit.. the bell that starts at 1:20 could be turned down a lil.. & you might need to cut it sooner to keep it from gettin stale...  I'd love to rap to it or let an artist Im workin with use it tho.. 

 

"beherit" damn this is fire too.. it would depend on what the voice is saying but I could def use this for a "sedatives" like track..

 

you tryin to get some rappers on your stuff??  

thanks man, i really appreciate your criticism.

i listened to a spell on you in the car today (i dont have one so i dont get a chance to often) and the bass was total shit, i've got to fix it lol plus it needs something extra..maybe a piano?

i was also thinking i hate myself and want to die should be shorter

the voice on beherit is satan (black philip) from the VVitch, he says "what does thou want? wouldst thou like to live deliciously? wouldst thou like to see the world? remove thy shift. does thy see the book before thee? i will guide thy hand"
Also beherit uses a sample from this track Hate Me by Sneaky Pete from this AZ collective The Society of Invisibles 

and not really, I rap and do extreme metal vocals, i just want to get my beat production skills down before i waste my time rapping on sub-par tracks

February 4, 2020
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King Lucem Ferre said
Pretty dope, I'd say.

Keep making beats.  

thanks man, means a lot, i dig your shit

February 4, 2020
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Noah Fence said
I only listed to a few. They're fairly generic horrorcore beats. Horrorcore is a dead genre so you may want to explore new avenues.

The ones I listened to were very slow and not very dynamic which isn't bad but it's hard to get excited about them.   

Totally redundant to say you only listened to a few, it's apparent by everything you said following that.

February 4, 2020
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Okay, sorry the criticism you asked for isn't what you hoped for I guess. 

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February 4, 2020
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sleepy said

The Warlock said
I like the vibe of "Spell on you" but the bass is weak.. and it needs an extra instrument on the verses to really set them off..

 

"forgotten rotten" is a pretty good raw underground beat but I personally cant stand that chirping noise throughout it..

 

"i hate myself" this is some fire ass wicked shit.. the bell that starts at 1:20 could be turned down a lil.. & you might need to cut it sooner to keep it from gettin stale...  I'd love to rap to it or let an artist Im workin with use it tho.. 

 

"beherit" damn this is fire too.. it would depend on what the voice is saying but I could def use this for a "sedatives" like track..

 

you tryin to get some rappers on your stuff??  

thanks man, i really appreciate your criticism.

i listened to a spell on you in the car today (i dont have one so i dont get a chance to often) and the bass was total shit, i've got to fix it lol plus it needs something extra..maybe a piano?

I was thinkin an eerie organ..

i was also thinking i hate myself and want to die should be shorter

the voice on beherit is satan (black philip) from the VVitch, he says "what does thou want? wouldst thou like to live deliciously? wouldst thou like to see the world? remove thy shift. does thy see the book before thee? i will guide thy hand"
Also beherit uses a sample from this track Hate Me by Sneaky Pete from this AZ collective The Society of Invisibles 

and not really, I rap and do extreme metal vocals, i just want to get my beat production skills down before i waste my time rapping on sub-par tracks  

haha I feel ya.. well, I'm down to spit on some of your subpar shit you dont wanna use.. if youre down to possibly adjust 'em.. producing some random songs for people could help as promo for your music..

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February 4, 2020
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real feedback

a spell on you the only track I listened too

is better than anything the warlock has ever put out

it's just an instrumental and all but I could see that working in a movie opening credits something like that.

keep it up

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February 5, 2020
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the_desirable _smack said
real feedback

a spell on you the only track I listened too

is better than anything the warlock has ever put out

it's just an instrumental and all but I could see that working in a movie opening credits something like that.

keep it up  

Lmao smack, thanks bro xD 

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