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Albert
September 1, 2018
3:59 pm
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Chalk on the ground
Sigil is there, ceremony prepared
Time to bring a friend around
66 legions are led by him,
Every one of the cohorts rife with them
Who’s them? Hehe, well if you insist on knowing
Don’t blame me if your mind starts blowing
They are servants, they are death
They fell from Him, all out of breath
Led astray, they were, and who led this host of Hell?
None other than Bael, Eastern King of Hell.
Here he comes, in the form of a Toad
Speaking so hoarsely, he sounds kinda stoned
But make no mistake, he has come for a reason
Bound by the conjurer, he’s here for the season
Power, invisibility, a host of devils
What can’t he do? Surely there’s a limit
Maybe there is, maybe he’s just a gimmick
In the darkness of it all, here comes the Carnival.

What do you guys think? (This is my first rap song)

September 1, 2018
7:19 pm
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Mr cock phonius antique equestrian, ya need a beat man. Right now its just rhyming words on a page. If wording is your believed to be strong point then start playing around with sounds. Rhyming words is poetry, putting that to a beat, is music. Scruffy was right.

I feel knowing/doing both will help with the other. 

Im a machinist, i can draw parts and make them. Knowing how their made makes the drawing easier and vice versa. I dont wanna draw a part thats above my level of actually producing.

You dont wanna make a beat you cant keep up with. Or rap faster than the beat your making… Thinking this takes a little more thought process than “im gonna be a rapper today”

And not for nothing its easier to prove a finished product than all the prints and steps to get there. 

Over all the words are decent, but I need a beat to feel them and ill get it fully. For me even if one portion lacks slightly, the other can pick it back up. 

Whoop whoop Drunkalo :

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Yeah bitches, im that short gentleman mentioned in that youtube video.

And the very nice, level headed guy from that other youtube video.

September 1, 2018
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I am well aware. I plan to use Ridiculon for the music.

September 1, 2018
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Balls to the wall with my Johnson in a power socket
Breathin really heavy like I’m watchin Helga with a locket
Crackhead thoughts fill my mind and I can’t stop it
Talk what I talk but I’m drunk so I can’t walk it
Ain’t no balled up socks or a banana in my pocket
You should always shave your cooch unless you datin Davy Crockett
I got herpes on my face but I really can’t knock it
And this ain’t a clown nose; it’s a great dane’s red rocket

BARS

Whoop whoop Bonesaw Wizardstick :

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September 1, 2018
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Boom! Drop the mic

Yeah bitches, im that short gentleman mentioned in that youtube video.

And the very nice, level headed guy from that other youtube video.

September 2, 2018
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Bonesaw Wizardstick said
Balls to the wall with my Johnson in a power socket
Breathin really heavy like I’m watchin Helga with a locket
Crackhead thoughts fill my mind and I can’t stop it
Talk what I talk but I’m drunk so I can’t walk it
Ain’t no balled up socks or a banana in my pocket
You should always shave your cooch unless you datin Davy Crockett
I got herpes on my face but I really can’t knock it
And this ain’t a clown nose; it’s a great dane’s red rocket

BARS  

Damn, that’s good. I haven’t heard that before. Who wrote it?

September 2, 2018
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cacophonousAntiquarian said

Damn, that’s good. I haven’t heard that before. Who wrote it?  

Me.

September 2, 2018
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Bonesaw Wizardstick said

Me.  

Oh shiiiiiiiiit

So, I admit that I don’t know much about rapping, in fact, almost nothing. So forgive me for asking: what is so imperative about bars? Does the song just not fit right otherwise? What if you have a guitar solo to cover the rest of the measures?

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