Well I figured I'd ask before I got skewered.

I don't need a chorus cuz it bores us and whores just want cash and gold, they're real bold like Eric Holder

Your rap is whack like smokin crack with two dicks thinkin their pimps as they kidnap your mom for ransom

This song won't sell shit, I'm sick of it, being told I'm nothing because they think I'm bluffing, bitch You're dead ..."but I'm still givin you head" I don't care

Your bitch is hairier than chewbacca and needs some nair, then I'll take that hairless cunt to my lair or rape her at the county fair

At the age of thirteen I OD'd on thorazine. I fucked up my dopamine and been high so long I act clean, unless I get rude like that Ravishing Rick dude

I act beligerant, I'm a miscreant, a villain, a juvenile delinquint and don't mean any of it

When I die, I hope you suffer, cuz I'm flier than Flyin Brian and you're a heffer, whatever, your pussy reeks like old leather

Could you tell me somethin? Are you dumb or just huffin paint? [psshhh] and aint it lame that sling blades are illegal and I can't slash your face, for real though

You tried to fuck me over, so I trolled your ass like Jehovah's witnesses then tired you out with physical fitness, you're witless and all the bitches think you're a dud like elmer fud with that bill forward pilgrim hat, it's whack, I'm sorry [...wait no I'm not], I laughed when you got face smacked, eye blacked n jaw jacked

Now back to your girl. She's a hag with a bag over her face, but she enjoys a swirl cuz she gets drunk til she hurls, blacks out and wants some pearls "mmm gimme a necklace"

I'm reckless, relentless, and I gave your mom tourettes, she took it and to think she almost turned lez... its messed. so lets finish this after I get dressed, Jeff

Go smoke meth, get arrested and excuse me while I suck your girls breasts, then beat her again with a club, but I jest though if you like you can be the ref.

inb4THATSHITISWHACKin.... 5...4...3..

LTB said
Too much emphasis on trying to rhyme every little word, jumps around a lot especially that first line lol what does chorus boring us have to do with whores wanting cash and gold? 

Good points. It does need to be arranged.  I wrote it in sections so it'd be easier to rearrange it if needed.