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10:31 pm
June 26, 2014
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OK it started off with a gram, and then I formed me a habit,
I chopped that hoe on the table, white boy yes, I'm goin' savage,
I went from 0 to go, in about 50 or less,
And now my heart is beatin' fast just like it's Russian Routlette,
my lungs are blacker than most, I'm chain smokin' on the daily,
I gotta have me a toke, I do that shit before breakfast,
I don't even want no breakfast, I'd rather pop me a pill,
White boy so throwed off on this track, I cannot sit my ass still,
I cannot even think straight, my thoughts are cloudy at best,
I see the world thru these red eyes, devil all on back,
the devil all in this glass, this glass, full of that brown,
I'm gambling with my life, I cannot seem to turn down.
Imma fall off in this club, because I think I fit in,
Everybody playin' with they nose in this city of sin,
It's a den full of thugs, I surround myself with hustlers,
But I don't talk to none of them - I'm all by lonesome.
sittin' in this bitch, 1 deep, not givin' a damn,
I'll take me another shot, mixin' white with that brown,
and now I'm finna blackout, it's too much for me to handle,
I'm finna go Rambo, as I grip on this handle,
I don't trust none of these hoes, get you caught in a scandal,
get you for all your money, get you fucked up and knocked out,
they can suck on my cock now, I ain't no fuckin' with them,
I'll take they ass out the back, and bust 'em dead in they SHIT
I'm Gettin' high on the daily, I just cannot seem to stop it,
The world an addiction, we all living for nonsense,
What the fuck is a conscience? I don't trust mine at all,
Beause it always seem to locked up behind them walls,
I been throwed off for a minute, My brain permanently damaged,
Ain't no comin' back from this, I'm just a natural savage,
I'm out the South goin' ham bitch, I'm on a bottle of Hen,
Straight up no chaser, wit' a blunt, blowin' dro in the wind,
and now I poppped me a pill, it's over with for me DAWG,
a 3 way blackout, on that shit again, my heart finna stop
My eyes they close and I lift off, I'm taken away,
There ain't no winnin' this game, are you sure you wanna play?
10:36 pm
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04.0/10.0
overall.
awfully paranoid, arent you?
10:46 pm
December 6, 2014
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scruffy said
04.0/10.0
overall.
Yeah, if that...
Some of it doesn't rhyme. Beat was okay and at least you kept with the flow that's more than I can say for some other PPL I've heard. But still couldn't listen to the whole thing I'd rather watch this rerun of Roseanne
Just keep at it ninja you got potential
"Seek Constantly Therefore To Know What Is Painful And To Cleave Thereunto, For By Pain Cometh True Pleasure" - Aleister Crowley
10:51 pm
June 26, 2014
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Bet it up killaz 
11:09 pm
May 9, 2014
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I finished it through, I liked it.
"Your girl fucked me 'cause you cummin' quicker than FedEx Air"- Sean Law
12:07 am
June 26, 2014
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JiffyLong said
I finished it through, I liked it.
Thanks bro, here's an mp3 link for you: http://www.sharebeast.com/3ir2ffj76xak
7:54 pm
July 17, 2014
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Honestly I've never been a fan of white rappers or any rappers saying white boy. And honestly if you're going for dark. Steer away from the gangster thug shit.
That being said, there is potential.
Let your freak flag fly and run naked through the Forrest
8:35 pm
March 20, 2013
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i don't really see how that is dark. but then my idea of dark is taking an impact drill, a length of barbed wire and a blowtorch into a club and mutilating people in the toilets.
i listened to the whole thing, which means it wasnt complete garbage. that being said, why the wanna be swag shit? that was my least favourite part of it. vocals were mostly clean, the beat was nice and it made a modicum of sense to me.
tips for the future, stack your vocals. do dubs/aldlibs etc and itll sound heeeaps better. sound quality wise it was decent, what kind of mic you using? mixing program?
as @djscrubb would say, get on youtube and google that shit, youll learn heaps.
in conclusion, i would say you have some potential to not suck. just keep practicing. oh and don't say white boy. makes me think your sitting there in your makeshift home studio in black face. oh and grills..... cmon man. noone looks cool in a grill least of all a skinny white kid with bum fluff goatee, pimples and all.
8:19 am
October 8, 2014
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That's right! haha youtube that shit son. Heaps is a new word in my ever growing vocabulary!
11:00 am
March 20, 2013
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djscrubb said
That's right! haha youtube that shit son. Heaps is a new word in my ever growing vocabulary!
start saying the following words and your well on your way to becoming an honorary aussie.
G'day
mate (people you dont know or arent overly fond of)
cunt (your friends. example: Hey cunt, what you doing?)
yeah nah (example: yeah nah we went to the bush doof on satty, was fucking sick cunt)
sick is also acceptable. in a positive manner (that was fucking sick cunt, do it again)
and if you find yourself around alot of kiwis (islanders, mauldi, cookies etc, its all 2 sides of the same coin) bro and chur are also good. and if you come to perth our kiwi population is like 40%
also, swear ALOT. like alot alot.
8:23 am
October 8, 2014
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@novocaine haha that's dope man! I was in the Air Force and traveled all over the world and luv hearing peoples different cultures/food and slang!
Oh and that track, I mean....I don't wanna bash you my man, its just extremely amateur. You'll get better dude, like Novo said stack those vox homie definitely on the chorus son. Pan them shits out left to right, stack STACK STACK!!! Little bit of reverb, little bit of on-time delays ect ect.....
11:35 am
March 20, 2013
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@djscrubb just remember homie, when your in perth you hit me up. ill crank up the bbq and make you some good old fashioned aussie barbeque and cheap lager.
1:36 pm
November 12, 2015
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A decent track, you cunt.???
Id id give it a 5/10 I suppose. It's not the worst or best. Go back and rework the offbeat parts and yes, change "white boy" imo. Most black dudes accept white rappers now(perhaps grudgingly at times). It's not really a talking point. Mixing in the vocals sounded pretty good. Keep working Bro!
4:50 pm
March 20, 2013
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oh god i forgot about this song.
why would you do this to me ridik.
now i have to go clean out my ears.
6:47 am
October 8, 2014
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Remember back in the day when the forum used to be in the comment section after every post? on the old site, I remember everyone calling this dude Fire Queef....some shit like that...
7:29 am
November 12, 2015
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Fuck I didnt check how old the thread was ha ha.
Fire Queef lol. You opened yourself up to that one bud.
7:45 am
October 8, 2014
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Naw man, this is like YEARS ago. Before this site even had this forum, at the bottom of each site update there used to be a "Comments" section and that's were everyone logged in and bitched at each other and talked about whatever. I just remember this dude from back then being called Fire Queef for some reason! haha God that's like 5-6 years ago i guess. There's quite a few people that have been coming to this site since the inception. I know I've personally been coming here since '01 I guess....but back then it was Real Juggalos dot com running the web game, but when Faygoluvers really got poppin they just crushed the game and never looked back! lil history for ya...
8:19 am
February 24, 2014
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along with Milenko500. I think they were based in Glen Burnie MD, where I was living at the time.
I'll fuck you till you love me, Faggot!
-Tyson
8:21 am
February 24, 2014
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but back on topic, I hate this guys voice. and whats up with the teeth. is that a grill in his mouth, or a payday?
I'll fuck you till you love me, Faggot!
-Tyson
10:07 am
November 12, 2015
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Ah yes i remember Real Juggalos! I used to have a Christmas shirt of them with a clown Santa ripping Eminems head off and putting it in a bag!
Yes Sean, he looks like a cunt I must admit, who the fuck wants gold teeth?
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