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November 9, 2018
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iINhaleCHEMtrails said

I can rap circles around you and I don't even rap

 

Honestly though I'd love to hear what you consider your best material  

do your best to scour the interwebs for somethin' more lyrical than that...

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November 9, 2018
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The Warlock said

do your best to scour the interwebs for somethin' more lyrical than that...  

Got it!

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November 9, 2018
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The Warlock said

im not that much of a hater.. theres been worse successful juggalo rappers.. i can definitely see his likeability.. i feel like if more people would just listen to my stuff, id be good.

and im not that obscure..

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Keep it up bud! Hopefully you can have 800 subscribers by time your second  decade of ridiculousness draws near

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The Warlock said

do your best to scour the interwebs for somethin' more lyrical than that...  

anybody from the 90's on the east coast

November 9, 2018
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The Warlock said

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Go listen to how Bronson, hell, even Riff Raff finds and stays in the pocket of the beat while never playing catch up at any point in their verses in the original "Birds on a wire" track.
Then compare it to your version and realise where you need improvement at Warlock. How you hear your verse's in your head when writing is how they should be delivered, unless you purposely intended to rhyme off beat and forced.

please time-stamp where im off-beat.. (im the 2nd verse)

if not jump-off my dick..  

2:20, Mr.Rap superstar Jordan man.

Punchlines and extreme emphasis on the last word in a bar are also two different things, unless your Tupac, but you would probably argue your better than him too.

Stop asking family members for honest critiques kid. Puns and punchlines are not the same, and you have neither.

What started as light hearted critiques and props to encourage you seems to have bruised your already inflated, yet fragile ego, why don't you put that video up of your live performance and those random people just casually walking through your set, at least that was some what entertaining.

Good luck with your little hobby kid, lol.

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lol, listen to Sanctuary again tho... If J spit it in the exact same tone you'd say it was the greatest song you ever heard..

i know im not that likable but... https://faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/photo-booth/faces-of-flhf/page-7/#p210944

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November 9, 2018
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Karacalla said

2:20, Mr.Rap superstar Jordan man.

Punchlines and extreme emphasis on the last word in a bar are also two different things, unless your Tupac, but you would probably argue your better than him too.

Stop asking family members for honest critiques kid. Puns and punchlines are not the same, and you have neither.

What started as light hearted critiques and props to encourage you seems to have bruised your already inflated, yet fragile ego, why don't you put that video up of your live performance and those random people just casually walking through your set, at least that was some what entertaining.

Good luck with your little hobby kid, lol.  

lmaoooo you know damn well that wasnt off beat..

nice try... listen to all my shit again dear..

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November 9, 2018
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iINhaleCHEMtrails said

anybody from the 90's on the east coast  

iINhaleCHEMtrails said

anybody from the 90's on the east coast  

 

GOD! ONE DAY I'LL COME THIS HARD@!!!@

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November 9, 2018
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The Warlock said

lmaoooo you know damn well that wasnt off beat..

nice try... listen to all my shit again dear..  

Yes..yes that was off beat. What are you deaf or retarded? Did you not read when I basically told you about how actual MC's stay in the pocket? 

Also,

The Warlock said

do your best to scour the interwebs for somethin' more lyrical than that...  

Pfff...above average at best. Step that troll game up. Lyrics don't mean a thing if you don't have Style, flow, delivery, ect.

Your entire presence on the mic is similar to a plain cheese pizza, nothing exciting. Just Meh.

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iINhaleCHEMtrails said
anybody from the 90's on the east coast  

https://www.youtube.com/wav=AwzeM2J3Emk

 

GOD! ONE DAY I'LL COME THIS HARD@!!!@  

BUT most people know who Tim Dog is though, while your a legend inside of your own mind. Yes! Strive to rap like that.

Fucking Kanye of YouTube ova' here.

You really do suck at trolling though.

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November 9, 2018
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The Warlock said

iINhaleCHEMtrails said
anybody from the 90's on the east coast  

 

GOD! ONE DAY I'LL COME THIS HARD@!!!@  

Big L 

Biggie

Bustarhyme

Rza gza

Mobb deep

Nas 

Jedi mind tricks

Black moon

Ra the rugged man

Tupac

Necro

Ice cube

a tribe called quest

Jay z

Eminem

Rakim

Bone thugz

Rakewon

Mos def

Krs one

Jurassic 5

Gangstarr

 

Want more????

Wouldn't matter tho I mean their all inferior to you right??

November 9, 2018
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Karacalla said

Yes..yes that was off beat. What are you deaf or retarded? Did you not read when I basically told you about how actual MC's stay in the pocket? 

Also,

The Warlock said

do your best to scour the interwebs for somethin' more lyrical than that...  

Pfff...above average at best. Step that troll game up. Lyrics don't mean a thing if you don't have Style, flow, delivery, ect.

Your entire presence on the mic is similar to a plain cheese pizza, nothing exciting. Just Meh.

The Warlock said

iINhaleCHEMtrails said
anybody from the 90's on the east coast  

https://www.youtube.com/wav=AwzeM2J3Emk
 
GOD! ONE DAY I'LL COME THIS HARD@!!!@  

BUT most people know who Tim Dog is though, while your a legend inside of your own mind. Yes! Strive to rap like that.

Fucking Kanye of YouTube ova' here.

You really do suck at trolling though.  

For real the guy wasn't half bad. I'll listen to him a million out of a million times over this other trash

November 9, 2018
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iINhaleCHEMtrails said


 
GOD! ONE DAY I'LL COME THIS HARD@!!!@  

Big L 

Biggie

Bustarhyme

Rza gza

Mobb deep

Nas 

Jedi mind tricks

Black moon

Ra the rugged man

Tupac

Necro

Ice cube

a tribe called quest

Jay z

Eminem

Rakim

Bone thugz

Rakewon

Mos def

Krs one

Jurassic 5

Gangstarr

 

Want more????

Wouldn't matter tho I mean their all inferior to you right??  

LOL.. please compare me to more legends tho...

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Karacalla said
https://youtu.be/C-nk7cJjQkw  

dont forget about this mediocrity...

HES raising the bar tho right??? lmfaoooo

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The Warlock said

dont forget about this mediocrity...

HES raising the bar tho right??? lmfaoooo  

As an artist on Psychopathic, uh yea, last time I checked he out sold Hoodoo and Lytes last albums combined with his debut and got the clowns to change up their entire style.

I don't know how much more you want the bar raised at this point as you keep moving the goal post in every reply Mr. Jordan Superstar rapper.

Quite frankly, he's making a living off of his art and your a self proclaimed 'rap god' arguing on a message board my dude.

Call your next album "Soul Searching" and have it be sixty minutes of all silence.

Take it to that upper level homie.

I dug a song or two from you dude, but your ego is off putting and completely unwarranted.

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November 10, 2018
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The Warlock said

iINhaleCHEMtrails said

 
GOD! ONE DAY I'LL COME THIS HARD@!!!@  

Big L 
Biggie
Bustarhyme
Rza gza
Mobb deep
Nas 
Jedi mind tricks
Black moon
Ra the rugged man
Tupac
Necro
Ice cube
a tribe called quest
Jay z
Eminem
Rakim
Bone thugz
Rakewon
Mos def
Krs one
Jurassic 5
Gangstarr
 
Want more????
Wouldn't matter tho I mean their all inferior to you right??  

LOL.. please compare me to more legends tho...  

Not a comparison at all and you know it but whatever keep making shitty music nobody cares about

November 10, 2018
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i nearly caught a ddddui while i was fubbbbbar, but im oooooook now. 

mclllllllllllllllll.  

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November 10, 2018
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The Warlock said
lol, listen to Sanctuary again tho... If J spit it in the exact same tone you'd say it was the greatest song you ever heard..

i know im not that likable but... https://faygoluvers.net/v5/forum/photo-booth/faces-of-flhf/page-7/#p210944  

Sorry to dump on your shit but you should be more humble. Terrible bar structure, too many syllables, basic rhyme schemes, unprofessional mixing and mastering, uninspired subject matter, unoriginal beats...

I could go on.

You should only really listen to and absorb criticism from other artists. You don't need to respond to everyone who disses your shit but you should be more humble. You aren't as good as you think you are and being humble will allow you to see your weaknesses and progress at a faster rate than you have over the last X amount of years. 

Again, I'm sorry to sound like a dick but you sound like a bigger dick, by telling everyone how amazing you are, when in reality, you're basic.

It hurts to be harsh, believe me, but you need to chill.

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Im 38, i don't rock to this  

 

Then I forgive you for sounding so old.  

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scruffy said
i nearly caught a ddddui while i was fubbbbbar, but im oooooook now. 

mclllllllllllllllll.    

SCRUFFY SAYS MCL! I mean i knew the man had it in him, but to vocalize it. Awe, Im totally feeling all warm and fuzzy!

Edit: i just googled it and it means Medial collateral ligament. Let's wait till he wakes up to find out what he was meaning.

Yeah bitches, im that short gentleman mentioned in that youtube video.

And the very nice, level headed guy from that other youtube video.

November 10, 2018
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Cat Burgerler said
Then I forgive you for sounding so old.    

Son, when i was your age i had 2 full time jobs. Had to walk to shcool up hill both ways. Fix your hair and pull up your pants. Stay off my lawn. J/k

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Yeah bitches, im that short gentleman mentioned in that youtube video.

And the very nice, level headed guy from that other youtube video.

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