Hahahaha

That'll get the crowd jumpin'!!

Holy shit @lucem-ferre you just made my drunken night man!!! Thanks, it brings me back to that day. Warlock was so butthurt, it's still hilarious.

This is why he has earned the nick name Joyce Da 5'9"

Ahhh, now I remember why I can't stand that dude. I made it about six pages in and had to stop.

came off as a cocky arrogant asshole. he aint even average

Well I guess there was a rap battle, I read the earlier posts. Now I have an understanding. Kinda, I didn't read all.

well i would do a full breakdown of the battle but i see on this forum yall dont do that

so imma just drop the categories and explainations

flow /structure = i feel both had they own when it came to flow ... both was pretty good, structure at that point did'nt matter much, so i guess i would say this is about a tie

punches/ personals= this is where the battle splits off from being eve, .... warlock had alot of entertaining concepts and shit.. but when it came to delivering punches and jabs, he came with some but had alot of filler between, and pat actually had some form of a diss in about every line... some were just light jabs ... actually most were light jabs but some were pretty good, and when u add 100 small jabs together that wins fights as well as hard hits .. 
so basically i feel pat won because of consistancy 

similies/metaphors= warlock had a style of his own .. his style didnt have many similies, but his metas were noticable, not very many of them but enough to make it interesting ... the execution of them could use a bit of work but he has some nice ideas, i do feel that pat had alot of similies, but he seemed to be strong with the metas, the execution of them was decent.. could be very dangerous if he utilized them better ... i do feel pat had enough to get the win for this category

complexity/ creativity = i feel that as far as the creativity and complexity goes .. war was up there and pat shined hardest with the creativity .. as i said or was about to say, pat has some very interesting concepts and the attacking angle he uses could be very vicious, he seems to need a bit more practice and he'd be a beast

Over all tips and help :

i feel that warlock should have not "dumbed it down" ... cuz i feel if he didnt .. he could have beaten or tied pat/ his last line just shows the skill is there and he chose not to use it/

try to use less filler, (try to use even small jabs untill u get to the main punch), try to utilize personal info to compile with your punches and they'll be more effective

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i feel pat came the way u should in a battle, went str8 in there, slapped the opponent around, and left, use'n little filler and attacking consitantly/

try to work on your complexity tho, execute your metas and similies with better thought out concepts and punches

my vote = pat