You should rap thru a megaphone. Here's some more beepy atheism u might like:

YouTube Video: Angelspit -100% (100% F*cked Mix by Combichrist) 

i really never tell people this but i feel u must know

ur shit was bad bro, as others were say'n the beats were fucked, your flow to the beats were fucked. and lyrically it needs work, it seems like had u came out with this in 92 ur shit would be a bit more accepted.

im surprised u have the gull to sell any one of the songs u made .. u gotta stick around the forum and see what u can learn from others, im sure someone on here can teach u what u need to learn to make ur music a bit better

NagaJolokia said
Hey, y'all

Thanks for welcoming me into your community. I've been down for over 10 years (sorry if this ain't impressive to the O.G's that have been down since Bass-Ment Cuts or whatever lol)

I don't want to use this section to advertise my album -- if I want to do that, I can just pay the administrators to run an ad, and I will eventually do just this. But, for now, if you want to check out my music, the entire album is streaming on Bandcamp. If you want to give it a listen, you don't have to buy it, but I suggest purchasing a download if you like it and sending it to whoever will like it.

http://nagajolokia.bandcamp.com/releases

Thanks for taking the time to read my inane rambling

whoop whoop

Naga Jolokia

Maybe try to learn the basics before trying to be experimental. I used to be known as a fairly asshole critic in horrorcore because i kept shit very very very honest and i literally closed out of the first song after 15 seconds.

You can't run before you walk. You kinda sound like you wanna be death grips but the thing is mc ride knows about production value and rhythm and music theory. You gotta know the rules before you can break em. You know?

You say you been down for ten years. Dope. How long you been rapping is all that matters to me and i sincerely hope you just started the week you recorded this. 

I'm in the process of making a shitty experimental rap song myself and I'm basically trying to be garbage and its taken me three months so far. You gotta hone your art. Flex it. Twist it inside out. Start over a simple beat and just try landing on beat. Hit the snares.

I love this show that used to be on mtv, maybe you can find it online. It's called made. In the show, a kid writes in about a goal they have and the show sends them a coach and they film the process. Sometimes it was wack shit like i wanna be made into prom queen but when the people wanted to be musicians i always learned a lot. 

One episode the coach took the kid into a grocery store and had him freestyle about what ever he was buying. Just spent the entire trip getting him to spit stupid shit about potatoes and cheese and cookies and milk etc. Just everything. The point was to get the kid to throw away lines to force him to hear his voice and to challenge him to think on his feet. 

Do that for a few years and then come back and maybe your shit won't sound like you don't know what you're doing. 

NagaJolokia said
Not having time to multitrack floating vocals similar to what ICP does on their albums is not the same thing as not knowing how to mix an album. 1. I don't need mixing advice. What I actually need is a progressive rock band, which would have made the lyrics sound a lot better than the way they sounded against unauthorized samples and beats I wasn't totally satisfied with.

2. I found a lot of the album listenable aside from wanting to do different things with the way the songs were arranged than I was able to in the time limit I had to get the album out by its release date, I just emphatically didn't like some of the songs I did on the album, and pushed ahead thinking that some listeners would be more forgiving than I am, because I tend to be more critical of what I do in various artistic fields than my fans, and it turns out that I should have trusted my first instinct.

It wasn't half-assed, 3. I actually put a lot of effort into it, it just wasn't what I wanted to do something different. I wanted to work with a live band and I couldn't, so this is what I came up with with samples alone. I did a lot of editing and reediting in the weeks leading up to the release to create a stoned, psychedelic effect, and I did a good job on that front, it's just that I didn't like a few of the songs and I wanted to work with a band, so I wasn't happy with the albums for multiple reasons, but lack of effort wasn't one. A lot of effort can be put into something that I still will wind up unsatisfied with for reasons beside "lack of effort", which didn't occur here.

And, quite frankly, 4. you're being very rude to me unnecessarily. 

1. Yeah, ya do, man. 

2. If YOU are the one doing the album and that's the best you can say about it, why would not expect others to react negatively?

3. Assuming that's true and you're not just grasping at straws, that's all all the more reason why would should stick around here and get some advice from people that, at the very least, know a little more about the shit than you. If that's you puttin in a lot of effort, you need help. Which is cool, man. Everyone has early project they're not proud of. Shit, there's a whole topic dedicated to it on here. 

4. Rude doesn't mean he's not being helpful. If you want people to pat you on the back and tell you that you did a good job when you didn't, you clearly came to the wrong spot, man. That's why NONE of my shitty music is on here. 

NagaJolokia said

And, quite frankly, you're being very rude to me unnecessarily. 

its because im an asshole. dont take it personally. its just how i express.

i still dont get it. if you didnt wanna do it... why do it?

if you think you dont need help, your in more trouble than i thought.

if you want someone to hold your hand and tell you how amazing your music is.... wrong forum guy. i might be an asshole but i was actually being constructive and the offer at help stands. scruffy is right, i am in no means professional, but i have a fairly decent grasp at what im doing  as a hobbyist.

and im always learning.