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OdDbALL MiDNigHT StRoLL ((first song))
September 17, 2018
4:00 pm
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https://youtu.be/1xCx9J-jBTM

what up everyone i thought I would share with you my first ever song I put out. I'd appreciate any feedback!

September 19, 2018
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Pretty damn cool if that is in fact your very first song homie.

My 2Cents would be to separate your vocals a bit on the chorus, the beat changes up, so should your vocal layers.

Also your flow is pretty decent and on beat, but it almost sounds forced due to you trying to maintain that gruffness in your voice. 

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September 19, 2018
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Appreciate the feedback and you taking the time to listen to it homie! I'm definitely gonna work on making things sound smoother and less forced. Can't wait to put out some new stuff soon

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